Red Ashes

Although this might sound strange, I loved this! It's hiralious to me and that's all that counts in my mind - probably because I love this kind of stereotype-teasing humour. ...

Hi! Well, I'm going to come and review anyway, see if I get anything the others have missed. My technique is different and picky to say the least, but most ...

Tanya! Do you remember me? :? And I have no idea why I left - I just kind of faded away. Last year was really stressful for me but I've ...

Okay, so this is a short story, but I was going to write a second part to it, since it was getting long. Tell me whether or not I should ...

Hi! I'm not really new - I was on here for several months but then I stopped (can't exactly remember why) and now I'm missing it so much! So, I've ...

Hey! I'm Ash and welcome to YWS! I get to ask questions! :D By the way, I see writing the same as you do. It's the best thing to just ...

Hallo there! I'm Ash! :D So, I can ask you a few questions... let's see... Well of course the most obvious; What do you read? What do you write? If ...

Thank you both for the imput. I am very grateful! :D I'm not sure about posting anymore pieces of this; I only ever get one or two posts and I ...

Hey! 'Tis Ash! I don't know, I never get the chat-thing. Not really good at internet sites, see... :D So! I am very open to PMs - make me feel ...

Hi, I'm Ash, and this is probably the best site ever! :D Okay... Well the others have asked all the good questions! :( Hmm... If you could meet one character ...

I like wolves! :D My corrections will be in red, and, where possible, I will underline the bit of your work I am referring to. Alrighty then! Lone Wolf Preface ...

I will critique. Red are my correction, and, where possible, I'll underline the bit of your writing I'm correcting. Savvy? Well, we'll begin then... :D “Jump” said a voice from ...

Hello! I'm not quite sure what to say here either :? but hello again! I love JK Rowling too, I keep rereading her books, over and over. My friend thinks ...

Another addition. It's kind of short, but it's the end of the chapter so I had to keep it as one post. Still, read, enjoy, comment, and that is all ...

Thanks you guys for commenting! :D Especially to Kelcia - for all the details, I will be sure to correct them. I'm so, so, so happy! Thank you, ~Ash~